pg 19

pg 19

    In “good storytelling” you don’t show a revolver unless its going to be fired.  Can you find the revolver on this page? 

   I also seem to remember STEVE and I having a discussion about whether or not you’d see HEADULON’s after his head amputed itself. Steve wasn’t for it and I was.  I just liked the idea of HIP-HOP using it as something to lean against. In the end I think it works, and it really helps sell his dialogue. Now watch as it magically disappears from the rest of the story….


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